Monday, October 29, 2012
5 Paragraph Persuasive Essay Practice
Sophie,The best Cold Person there Ever Was!
When I grow up I think I'd make a great cold person. One of my favorite things to do is have my teeth chatter a lot. I even have some experience at freezing my hands off. coldness comes naturally to me, I like coldness and I live in cold temperature, Therefore, I will be the best Cold person that ever was!
Coldness has always come naturally to me. There was this one time when I was ice cold for a week. I'm always freezing,ice cold, and shivering. Whenever I am cold,I am freezing. Being able to be cold all the time is the first step along the path to becoming a cold person.
Liking coldness is another thing I really enjoy. It's so exciting to like the coldness. When I'm liking coldness I feel like a icicle. I am to liking coldness,what Peyton Manning is to football.Being able to like coldness for the rest of my life would be awesomely cold!
Living in cold temperature takes special talent. I gained a lot of experience at living in cold temperature because I live in Sitka and Anchorage. I learned a lot about the cold the cold temperature. For example,I live in cold temperatures. The time I spent living in cold temperature is sure to give me an advantage when it comes to becoming a cold person.
The three most important ingredients required in order to become a successful cold person are having coldness come naturally to you,liking coldness,and living in cold temperarure, and I've got them all! I want to be a very cold person. I'm never so happy as when I'm in the midst of being very cold. It's like Catherine Bell said,"I love cold weather".When I am cold,I am happy,and that's why I'll be the best cold person there ever was!
Thursday, October 25, 2012
book review:Princess Academy
The book I read was Princess Academy by Shannon Hale. This book is about a 14 year old girl named Miri who lives on Mt.Eskel in a quarry village. Everyone in the village works in the quarry except Miri who is too small and her Dad won't let her. Life for Miri and the village girls is interrupted when the Prince from Danland must marry.One day a messenger arrives sent by the king telling the villagers their daughters 12 to 17 must attend the princess academy to get perpared to meet the prince. Miri and the village girls are escorted by the kings soldiers up the mountain to the princess academy. All the girls go through lessons like reading and writing and it turns out Miri likes learning. The girls go to a ball and get to meet and dance with the prince but after meeting all the girls the prince is undecided on who to choose and goes back to the castle with promises of return. Then bandits show up and try to kidnap the chosen princess but because no princess was chosen the bandits hold all of them hostage. After the girls escape from the bandits the prince finally returns,chooses a princess,Britta, and the prince takes Britta home to the castle. The theme of this book is its important to be brave so you can stand up for those who aren't brave. In one part Miri stands up for a girl named Frid who stands up to Olana when Olana says only Katar and Miri can return home but Miri ends up bringing the whole class home for winter break. Example is when the girls didn't want to escape the bandits because they were afraid but Miri convinced the girls to run.This example involves Marda, Miri's sister, Marda had to be brave and skin rabbits instead of Miri.
I really liked this book because it was written and described well with lots of detail.It didn't have a lot of humor but it had a nice emotional moments. This book had some romance so it would be good for people who like romance in books. I could connect this book to other books I've read. I would recommend this book to other 7th graders because it was a nicely detailed book.
I got this picture link from http://thebooksmugglers.com/2012/10/book-review-double-feature-princess-academy-and-palace-of-stone-by-shannon-hale.html
Wednesday, October 10, 2012
perfect paragraph practice unicorn vs. pegasus poop
I think its Pegasus not Unicorn who poops rainbows. Rainbows are in the sky and Pegasus flies, so he obviously has to poop the rainbows.Pegasus is the one who poops rainbows because Poseidon created Pegasus, and Poseidon is the god of the sea it makes sense since you have to have water to have a a rainbow . Wikipedia said that rainbows were a present from god, Pegasus is have divine.Unicorns are not divine.So the Pegasus is most likely the one to poop rainbows.I think that if either one were to poop rainbows it would definitely be the Pegasus.
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